Raw facts “poem”. What is your take on this? Like, dislike?

Published January 26, 2011

Question by freckles579: Raw facts “poem”. What is your take on this? Like, dislike?
I made some changes. And also I need a title. Thanks!

This world was once simple
but not anymore.
Being kind to another
is now a mere chore.

The world has grown
and people aplenty.
The crimes of the earth
have grown to many.

We used to walk the streets
with no worries at all.
Now every corner
you see a street brawl.

Embattled in this world
that we call home.
What has come of it
when now we can’t roam.

Hazardous and desperate
the people have become.
What used to be beautiful
is nothing but a slum.

What can we do
to turn this around?
Is there no hope at all?
Are we being weighed down?

Being weighed down
from the sins of our brothers.
Has overridden the good
that last in all others.

Take a stand
and fight for the peace.
If every good soul does this,
the crime will decrease.

Best answer:

Answer by Kim K
You are GOOD… love the poem.

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