Only for people that have read “Crank” by Ellen Hopkins?(:?

Published February 5, 2011

Question by Maddie: Only for people that have read “Crank” by Ellen Hopkins?(:?
Okay.. so you know.. Kristina? And her alter ego, Bree?
I wrote a two voice poem with those characters. Is it any good?

Two Voice Poem
Kristina: Bree:
I want to be in the background. I’m the spotlight.
Where Am I? Does it matter?
Free of substance. Under the influence.
Through the same eyes we see,
But, I lost myself. But you found me.
Which is why I’m scared. Don’t be.
We’re the same.
I won’t get you into any trouble.

If you do; why is it that;
When the blame comes on; Because I’m not stupid.
You’re never there
To take it along side me? I know when to leave.
I belong.
Go.

I created you; I overrule you now.
I can destroy you And you know that.
Just as quickly.

How could
Even the slightest care or
Love help me
Prevail through my life?

Best answer:

Answer by lιиα became insane
I could never write a two-voice poem!

Yes, it sounds just like Kristina/Bree. Overall, it was a good poem, but stiff at some points [We’re the same. / I won’t get you into any trouble].

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