my rap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?

Published December 16, 2010

Question by Jesse: my rap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?
this is another song im writing its called METH

“there aint no recoveries
it kicks you upside the head until your brain collapse
enter medical labs producing chemical habitats
addictions gives abstracts to any man it attracts
pain and pleasures release through sexual acts
this disease is black
worldwide crisis of sexual transmitted transacts
toxic substances effects how the brain reacts
and attack the mental status
spread throughout ur body like bullet fragments
invade and enter like intergalactic tactics
ripping thru skin and flesh causing vein detachments
extreme cases of schizophranic panics
its sad how hopeless manics lifes end in tragic”

Best answer:

Answer by Nathan Loco
sounds good … try it with this beat:

see how that works out for you …

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