Is this a good poem about alcohol abuse?

Question by Funkmasterflex123: Is this a good poem about alcohol abuse?
Donkey kicked speech of a slurring slug
Contract the lungs of the suffering bastard
Compassion’s bloody eyes decanted into the mug
How’s it feel to rot from inside? Burn him faster

Addiction overtook you like ants on a picnic
Your throat is swelling shut with silenced promises
Laughing as you keel over. Fuck, your head is thick
Addiction swarms like angry bees, Covered with abscesses

The term addiction you constantly misconstrue
You fucking egotist, I’ll laugh when they seal your bloated coffin
All that you say is not, Has now come to define you
A ruined childhood, Irony’s blow will never soften
This poem is about my hatred toward my father for the crap he put me through because he was constantly drunk.

Best answer:

Answer by Raawwwrr
Sure.

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