are these good lyrics to a song?

Published July 13, 2010

Question by coolkid21: are these good lyrics to a song?
I knew a friend who was crazy
he f***ed a chick and had a baby
but let me rewind to remind yall what happened first
he would smoke blunts and die of thirst
he would b**** about how his lungs hurt
everybody told him not to smoke
but he would always light the pipe and choke
he ran out of food once and he was left hungry
its such a shame that he got the ultra munchies
somehow he recovered from that
then he started being gangsta and picked up the gat
loaded the clip and started doing dirty work
like shooting innocent people, God bless the church steeple
he started commiting all of the seven deadly sins
it was evident that God was gonna throw him in the trash bin
but now his life was too hard and cocaine took him over
he enjoyed the crystals going through his nose
flashy things activated him, so he bought a Bose
used his fingers to roll up a joint full of crack
i should’ve had his a** smacked
he felt weak and was passed out in the middle of the street
then he met some addict in a club and f***ed her under the sheets
then five months later, he finds out she got a big belly
he now realizes that the life he leads is so deadly
but he says hes strong and tells her have the baby
2 years later, he went all crazy
he almost killed the mother until she ran away
then he threw his knife and gat away
he cried all night, he couldn’t fight it
or jump over it nor bite it
so he had to live through it
and he put his needles, crystals, pipes bongs in the trash
he even stopped smoking buds and eating hash
he brought her back to him, he quit his life of sin
so then God took him out of the trash bin
Church took him over from Monday to Sunday
he rapped on the mic, showed off his talent
took care of his girl and started being a good parent
this is what happens when you turn all evil
you suddenly find out your dancing with the devil

Best answer:

Answer by Spaceman Spiff
they’re okay. youre gonna need some upbeat music to go along with it

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