I need your opinion on a story, that I am writing. Any feedback would help!?

Question by Casey: I need your opinion on a story, that I am writing. Any feedback would help!?
Prologue:
I’d been waiting for the moment to hit me, and when it did I thought it would never end. I endured the excruciating pain that electrified my body. Plenty of marks would be left from this . No matter though the worst part wasn’t the beating. The worst part was the fact that I knew everything that he was thinking. From just the awful stuff he was saying in his head I could tell how angry he was. My father had never been a very honorable man, still suffering from a longtime heroine addiction he takes his anger out on me, his only daughter. The drug like it does to many others drove him crazy when he didn’t have it. That’s when the beating would start. I always knew when he didn’t have it because of my gift. Sometime’s it can be a blessing or a curse. I can be sitting in the living room, and hear his thoughts when he’s charging down the stairs. Over time I’ve gotten used to it although I was smart enough never to tell him. I was also smart enough to hide when he ran out. Tonight like others I didn’t have time, he was just too fast.The man caught me when I was trying to sneak out the back door. What he was thinking made me feel like I wouldn’t even be able to get up in the morning. He began to reach for my chest.
“Your a sick man, get off of me.” I screamed
“How dare you doubt me. I brought you into this world Audrey, and I can take you out of it just as easy.” he emphasized
“You’re hurting me…”
I started to cry. He thought I was just his little play toy. He began to rip at my shirt, and took it off. I knew what was coming next.
“You ready girl, time for some fun!” he yelled
“Please, no!” I screamed
He stripped down, and began to do it. I tried harder then I ever had to block out the images, and words he was saying, and picturing to himself…

Best answer:

Answer by *****
It’s good but try using more advanced words “From just the awful stuff he was saying in his head” NEVER use the term ‘stuff’

try

“I knew this from the unimaginable things he thought that acted as a catalyst for his rage.”

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