what do you think of my song?

Question by simaaaaa: what do you think of my song?
please rate my song 1-10, someone tell me if my structure is right, and please be specific about what you do and don’t like, please and thank you. And by the way, this is not gospel or christian, this is a rock song.

This song is called “Pray for help”

It’s not that easy
To let go what you’ve had for so long
Habits develop and so do I
When I know what’s right and what wrong
It gets harder to go it alone, it last longer
When I’m all alone I know its unstoppable
I’m irrational and soon I fear I won’t get another chance so I’ll…

Pray to God that I’ll live another day
That I will not live this way
That I’ll get some help
and I’ll be OK

finally I released the chains that bound me
this leash around my neck
and everything that owns me
I’ll throw it all way
I’ll make it out today
Unharmed, but bombarded, I’ll…

Pray to God that I’ll live another day
That I will not live this way
That I’ll get some help
and I’ll be OK

Bridge:

I know I’ll be ok
I’ll live another day
Without your oppression
Without your discretion
I’m heading for home where I belong
I’m fighting this addiction
And I facing it head on
(louder) I’m facing it head on, I’ll…

Pray to God that I’ll live another day
That I will not live this way
That I’ll get some help
and I’ll be OK (hold note)

Best answer:

Answer by Mark.the.answer
Hey! great composition my friend! 10!!

hey, how about posting it together with vocals and music on youtube!!

I’ll be waiting my friend!!

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