Can someone help me make this sentence make sense?
Question by blahhh: Can someone help me make this sentence make sense?
hi im writing a proposal paper and someone told me this sentence makes no sense, but I NEED IT to be in the paper, it be nice if someone could correct it for me!-thankyou
“The problem is that the availability of contraception to teenagers needs to have some kind of restriction because use is easily becoming abused.”
haha beat.. this is just a simple proposal for a 12th english class, and i didnt choose the topic.but my whole goal isnt really touched in this question i guess?my goal is NOT eliminate bc! its to give the opportunity for parents 2 have a say.in other words any1 under 18 must have parental consent to use oral bc.but no you have not wasted my time.you just helped me out on my paper a lil because i need to add in consequences/rebuttals…thanx!hahaa
ha and i know PEOPLE HAVE SEX.shyt i have sex!lol.but i have sooooooooo many friends that do abuse contraceptives, dont use condoms at all just because they rely on just the fact they are on the “pill”.miss one day and ur fukked.with parental consent hopefully kids will have a better sense of what they are doing. but hey im saying this like its actually gonna happen.=p…my paper wont be that good.lol
Best answer:
Answer by Looweez
The easy availability of contraception to teenagers needs to have some kind of restriction because use is becoming abused.
The problem is, that teenagers’ access to contraception needs to have some kind of restriction because availability is too easy.
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