Resume Help… How does this sound and what or how can I make it better?

Question by Rhyannonn C: Resume Help… How does this sound and what or how can I make it better?
I am very goal oriented and can meet a given deadline. I am articulate and like things to be in perfect order. I have good phone and communication etiquette. I am very knowledgeable in Microsoft Office, especially in Word and Excel. My typing speed is 40 words per minute and I am excellent at filing and data input. I enjoy working with people but I can accomplish a given task independently. I have successfully managed many situations and tasks.

2004/2006 – Domestic Abuse Shelter – Client Supervisor
•Answering phones, crisis hotline, assisting battered/abused women
•Crisis intervention
•Filing
•Data Input
•Counselling
•Inventory
•Organizing staff and client events
•Supervised and advised up to 12 resident clients and their children
•Seeking help from other agencies for clients – emergency food – housing assistance – financial assistance – medical service – clothing – legal assistance
•Supported clients through court ccases, legal hearings, and assisted with paper work
• Maintaining rooms and office

2006/2007 – CRU Dog Rescue –

•Evaluating applications
•Answering questions
•Interview by phone and by person
•Check vet and personal references,
•Home checks
•Filing adoption applications and vet forms
•Planned fundraising events
•Data Input
• Transport
• Care of foster dogs
•Arranging medical care – routine and emergency
this is a uk resume not a us one by the way and no its not the exact one … nor is it in any real format its just basic til i figure out what i want on it

Best answer:

Answer by Maricely
In the first paragraph you need to not start every sentence with “I”

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