Do you think i’ve shown alot of improvement?

Question by YO ADRIAN(ShallowDəəp): Do you think i’ve shown alot of improvement?
Juss star this.

here is my old stuff:
“I hung out with the dark crowd
Listening to Lomb of God
My soul turned black and cold
I finally saw what road I was choosin
While my homies be snoozing
They kept lozin, with the red they oozing
I had to fight for my rights
For them muthfukkin Hollywood nights
I got into the rap game
Started with Remember the name
The name I blame for this shame on rap is cocaine
So lame, I’ll chew you up with my great dane
The respect I gained
As the insults rained
But I kept going
Without knowin
What my friends was burning”

Here is my new stuff:
“Sometimes I wanna wear a 2 mask cover my face
I don’t care how fast your going up the escalator,
Because I’m falling down these stares at the same pace
Everyday it’s the same old thing, I’m taking 1 step forward, 2 steps back
3 steps forward, 6 steps back, don’t know bout’ you, but I know for a fact
That slow ‘N’ steady wins the race
This is me
The pain that I hide in the cracks between inequality & Obscurity
Don’t lie cause I see it in your eyes when you check my spit for impurities
When I spit this rain
Not a day goes by when I don’t feel the pain
Some days I bring an umbrella to block the precipitation
I’ll take off this bronze armor and show you my lacerations
So unable to speak, shackled to bars due to Psychological Incarceration”
AAV i am getting better jackass

Best answer:

Answer by Hip Hop Rent-A-Cop
Yes, because i have been keeping track. I tattoo all of your verses to my forehead so that i won’t forget them. You have improved by leaps and bounds, and i would know. You know, because of the tattoos on my forehead.

I jest, i jest…..but seriously.

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