How good is this poem for school?
Question by I’m Infinite [WE TRIPPY MANE]: How good is this poem for school?
It’s kind of a metaphor as this guy’s friend is Money. Also is sort of a story.
“He met a guy, thought he was the coolest he’d ever met,
Wasn’t sick, but he stayed a yellow-ish green,
He came around when he pushed that, meth infedimene,
But he, never looked to help anybody that was in need,
Yet he had happy days, it couldn’t be better, in a dream,
Then a news flash, life wasn’t really as great as it seemed,
People started getting a hunger for his friend, like drugs to a crack fiend,
Wouldn’t fork over his cash, that left him with a cap in his spleen,
Woke up out of a coma in ’03, attached to a machine,
Doctors talking he didn’t listen, he said “what do you mean?”
“You’re paralyzed from the waist down, all because of your greed”
Yeah, I wrote it.
Best answer:
Answer by Rofl Mao
Its very funny =p i think it should be ‘listeen’ in the second to last line, i know its not a word but if you read it by the commas it should have a deeper vowel sound to go in with the rhyming pattern. Im not sure if you actually wrote this, if you did then top marks XD its great. If not im not sure why ur posting but thnx for sharing, lol. I think you shouldve told us his friend is money after the poem, just so we all so “OWH!” XD But still, great poem =) Im so saving it XD lol
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