i just made this from the top of my head sorry for any errors?

Question by puff “n” pass: i just made this from the top of my head sorry for any errors?
feeling has nothing to do with others,
its within you, its without you.
judgement has everything to do about your emotion,
of how people think about you.
its a certain reaction that would would improve.
smoking is something that creates feeling,
creates a numb, void feeling.
making sure that everything is falsely okay.
its within you, its with out you.
heroine is an addiction,
takes life and melts into a false world.
i feel numb, i feel like everything is melting,
i amk feeling okay, but for only a few hours.
i am melting, the sky is falling, the river is drained.
i gain my reality, depressed that my mind is going crazy,
and theres nothing i can do about it.
i do it more and more, for the feeling the feeling of happiness.
ill never experience true happiness again.
the feeling is within you your, mind is without you.

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Answer by Vic
Your expression is quite good.

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